#Writephoto ~ Rift #Poetry

Thursday photo prompt: Rift #writephoto

 

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Torn

Torn apart, my best piece of writing,

or so I thought by a cruel comment.

Like the backwash of a wave broken on our beach

The many rocks worn, cracked across their middle

still able to give a warm seat when I tire.

I have my favourites, where I can

run my hand across the small scars.

Straight lines, cruel whip marks

we all age and crack given enough time

The road marks on our faces as we age

The map of time passing,

the rift that marks all things.

The land falls away leaving a hollow

for the unknown traveller to fall int

A large cloud falls apart as if someone

had pulled a cotton ball in two.

It drifts on by, to be swallowed

by the other waiting clouds.

Whole again, as we too will be

when one puts a hand out to the other.

The rift is repaired. Would that everything

could be so easily mended

as a cloud drifting by.

With time and water, the force of the oceans,

the cracks in the rocks will be smooth again,

 their story untold. As if age had not touched them.

How do we mend a rift in time itself?

What falls between the space where

time has moved away from itself?

Like the wish written on paper as a child,

folded so many times

hidden in the crack of a rock on the beach.

My own wailing wall.

I have no recollection of the wish coming true

It may have done. Time has taken the memory

As I am sure the sea has taken my piece of paper

Smooth or cracked, a boulder

will tell its own story if you sit awhile…

AAAAA

 


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  1. memadtwo Avatar

    Just the way thought works! (K)

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  2. willowdot21 Avatar

    Glorious 💜💜

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  3. Eliza Waters Avatar

    Visually appealing words, well penned!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Eliza…

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  4. Michele Jones Avatar

    This is a beautiful poem. You have such imagery. If only it was that easy to mend a rift as the ocean does with a rock.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Michele…

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  5. Alethea Kehas Avatar

    What a beautiful poem <3

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  7. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    This is very visual and beautiful.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Anita sends her thanks, Robbie! I thought so too!

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  8. Jacquie Biggar Avatar

    This is lovely, Anita!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Glad you liked it, Jacquie…

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  9. Sue Vincent Avatar

    This is splendid, Anita. I love the mending of the broken clouds.x

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