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Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge… #Etheree

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 108, “Afraid & Grave,” #SynonymsOnly

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World

Gone by

Time entombed

Webs hang thin white

The walls dripped pain loss

Risky to touch the past

To Heaven unsafe, fearful

Being undone by my past thought

Crushed by fear, the light grows dimmer

I see faces from the past, dead, long gone…

©Anita Dawes

 

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  1. Colleen’s #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Recap No. 108, “Afraid & Grave”, #SynonymsOnly | Word Craft ~ Prose & Poetry

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  2. Vashti Q Avatar
    Vashti Q

    Beautiful, eerie and sad. Wonderful Etheree, Anita. :D xo

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      jenanita01

      Anita thanks you, Vashti…

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  3. Colleen’s #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Recap No. 108, “Afraid & Grave”, #SynonymsOnly – Colleen Chesebro ~ The Faery Whisperer

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    Colleen Chesebro

    Well done! I love the mournful tone of the Etheree. Samhain is all about the ancestors and you captured that perfectly. <3

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      jenanita01

      We thank you, Colleen…

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