“Flash Fiction 99 word Challenge for the Carrot Ranch Literary Community

This weeks prompt is a Broken Fence…

 

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Late one night after having a skin full, dad drove through Mrs Mack’s front garden. Breaking the fence was bad enough, but he took out her favourite roses too.

Dad said he was sorry, that he would fix the fence first thing.

Mum brought roses, but there was no answer when she knocked on the door. She left the roses on the step but watched to see if her friend would take them in.

They died where mum left them.

After a week, mum told us that some fences cannot be mended. That she had lost her best friend…


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  1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    Well, this does seem like an overreaction but some people do take umbridge at things like this.

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  2. Charli Mills Avatar

    Anita, that is true of some fences, and often it’s complicated. Well told in 99 words!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you Charlie!

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  3. Cathy Avatar

    That’s quite sad

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