Poem, Sober Reality

Mark Tulin's avatarCrow On The Wire

The sober reality came to me in a dream like all

important thoughts.

My good friend’s life on earth was disappointing.

She tried to achieve things

that she had a passion for.

She would get close

but never quite there.

Whether her confused mind got in the way,

or her choice of pursuit was wrong,

it was never meant to be.

She was destined,

I’m sorry to say,

for an ending

that was melancholy. 

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  1. Gary Avatar

    Always something I hold synergy with in your poetry. I often see that sadness in older people’s eyes. Hidden deep in war veterans especially who lost childhood along with friends. I see “Why me?” coupled with disbelief at post war generations who think they have it hard. Terrible though, nearing the end and realising life has not gone how the early dreams wanted.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Not quite near the end yet (I hope!) but still hoping for at least one dream to come true!

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      1. Gary Avatar

        Oh my, I never intended it to sound like you were near the end!!! Same here though, my goal I to publish something. Then again, I’m terrible at not seeing what I have achieved and replacing those with things I haven’t. Not very mindful methinks!

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        1. jenanita01 Avatar

          I am the same. People are always reminding me of my achievements. I think my fears must mask the good bits!

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          1. Gary Avatar

            Some minds never seem to grab the positive achievements properly…often a strong link between intelligence and ability to think on that aspect too. Fears do mask potential too. I’m there in that regard to publishing. I don’t even think it’s a rational thought process either!!!

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            1. jenanita01 Avatar

              It doesn’t appear to be a logical process, which surprises me…

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