A Lesson Learned

I love to read… everything…

I have the compulsion to read. It can be a short story I come across, a news item, or the words on that packet of cornflakes that someone forgot to put back in the cupboard.

I am also addicted to all those “How to be a Better Writer” books, and I must have read dozens of them in my time. All that self-doubt, I suppose.

My current read is The Anatomy of Story by John Truby.

This book may have changed the way I write forever. Every single chapter has highlighted either something I have been doing wrong, or worse still, not been doing at all.

I was getting in a pickle with the current WIP (I am hoping this is due to my present circumstances) so picking up this book was probably one of the better things I’ve done lately.

One of John Truby’s pearls of wisdom for the secret of an excellent book is that ‘your characters must be real people, extraordinarily real.’ 

One glance at mine stopped me in my tracks.

Never mind the characters, my story didn’t feel real either. The magic just wasn’t there. I had been hoping it would grow if I persevered, but every time I picked it up, I was disappointed.

There are three main characters in my story. Three very different men. Any one of them could turn out to be the villain or the hero. And that’s the premise of the story right there: keep the reader guessing until the end.

But I knew these men very well, having created them in my mind. Unfortunately, much of this knowledge has not found its way to the paper. The story will have to be rewritten, and most of all, these men need work….

Sink or swim?


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  1. acflory Avatar

    Anything that lets us ‘see’ more clearly is a gift. Don’t feel bad that your first draft isn’t ‘perfect’! It’s not meant to be. Now that you can see the story and the characters more clearly, you’re looking at them as a naive reader would, and that is exactly what every story needs…in my humble opinion. :D

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      You are right of course, Meeks. Much better than not seeing it at all…

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      1. acflory Avatar

        lol – did I ever tell you about how I did NOT see a monster plot hole…a week before the story was due to be published? Thank god for beta readers!!!!

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        1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

          I have never managed to find any beta readers in my time in writing, but they must be invaluable…

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          1. acflory Avatar

            They are, if you can find one who is in tune with your style etc and is /honest/ about the things that don’t work.

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            1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

              Some big ifs there, Meeks…

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              1. acflory Avatar

                Yes, very big ‘ifs’, but if they work, they work beautifully.

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  2. cagedunn Avatar

    Always, by the time I get to the end the first time, I realise what’s missing, and do a full rewrite. Then the second time I get to the end, I realise what would make it stronger, and do a full rewrite. Sometimes, the third rewrite is the end of it all, apart from the fix-its and spelling/grammar check … but not always. it takes time to get to the depth necessary, and sometimes, the brain gets a bit tired and won’t let me do it all in one shot.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      So much is involved, isn’t it? And the more I write, the harder it seems to become… I won’t give up though… 💖

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    2. acflory Avatar

      I agree, Cage. That first draft is for me – the voyage of discovery. The subsequent ones are for the Readers, so they can see/hear/feel the story the way I do…or as close to that as I can manage.

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  3. Annette Rochelle Aben Avatar

    Woman of the world… do not despair. YOU have been given the keys to the Kingdom and as such, shall be churning out such worthy material that other will want to know your secret. And thank you for sharing that awesome nugget of success.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      I am always happy to share, Annette… and your support is most welcome…

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  4. Esther Chilton Avatar

    I’m sure you’ll be able to do them justice. And it’s great that you have the awareness that they need work. We all go through times like this where characters or parts of our story don’t feel right. You really can do it.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Thanks for your encouragement, Esther… 💖💖

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  5. Darlene Avatar

    We know that you can create very real characters. I thought the characters in The Mystery of Folly’s End were very real indeed!

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Thanks for that, Darlene… you have just made this old girl very happy!

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  6. Grant at Tame Your Book Avatar

    The way of the writer. A circuitous route, one without absolutes, but the milestones guide to exceed the expectations of the readers, market, and author. Tough but doable, and most importantly, you’ve got this!

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Thanks for your encouragement, Grant, means a lot right now…

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