I see you… #Poetry

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I See You


I see a piece of you
like a puzzle that has slipped out of place
it's the reason you are out of step with your life.
I see the chaos in the space between
strange moments that don't fit
that don't belong to you.
As if someone is trying to occupy
the space before it closes.
I hear your voice, the sound belongs to another
harsh, cruel. It scares me as if someone
has taken a piece of my mind.
Does it match your missing part?
Will we find a way to put them back in place?
will life tear more away,
as if we were no more than cardboard cut-outs
from a forgotten jigsaw puzzle...
 
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      1. thereluctantpoet Avatar

        Always a joy and pleasure to read and share great posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you have a great day!! 😘💕🎁🌹

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  1. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    An excellent poem and metaphor, Anita. I enjoyed the darkness and questioning in this one too.

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Thank you so much, Diana… 💕

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  2. John W. Howell Avatar

    Excellent, Anita.

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  3. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    An impactful poem, Anita

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Thanks Robbie! 💕

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  4. Claire Avatar

    Your poem spoke to me. There’s some really powerful images here. Bravo!

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Thank you so much, Claire… 💕🙏🏻

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