Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge

Somehow, we have come up with two haiku this week, and I quite like the first one best…

17 thoughts on “Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge

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  2. Great work, Anita. The second one really grabs me! Remember, haiku are not philosophical, nor do they deal with generalizations. I would say the first one is a senryu because of the last line, which is kind of witty. The second is haiku, and it’s excellent. I like how this haiku puts me right next to you… I think I can see that shadow. ❤

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