Wrong Turn… #Keepitalive #Whatdoyousee

What do you see # 6

Dear friends, in the memory of our dear Hélène from Willow Poetry, Sadje has decided to continue this challenge, and we are delighted to take part…

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Wrong turn

I have taken the wrong road

The curve ahead looks never ending

The shaft of light through cruel dark leaves

Claws waiting to drag me from my world

The play of light on tarmac, inviting

A voice from the shadows whispering

Turn back, yet my car will not reverse.

I am pulled forward past the light into liquid darkness

A black shroud waving through my headlights

A feeling of having been swallowed.

I wait to hear teeth snap

I close my eyes, no more than a blink

I am back where I started,

the light unchanged, the curve ahead inviting…

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  1. Chris Hall Avatar

    Beautifully creepy and beautifully penned :)

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Chris…

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  3. judeitakali Avatar

    Woah this is so creepy, i love it. The suspense and the ‘liquid darkness’ and the moving in circles, an exceptional tale

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Jude…

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  4. Sadje Avatar

    Fantastic! Very vivid imagination. Thanks for joining in.

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re welcome 😉

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