#Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

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June 13: Flash Fiction Challenge

June 13, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about the work of many hands. Is it a cooperative effort or something else? Go where the prompt leads!

Respond by June 18, 2019. Use the comment section below to share, read, and be social. You may leave a link, pingback, or story in the comments.

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Hands can be gentle, kind, violent, creative

I remember my grandfather’s large hands

Callused from wood cutting

Strong, they made me feel safe

Nothing in this world, or the next

I often thought, could ever get past them

Whereas my grandmothers were small and gentle

Featherlight, often times I could hardly feel her touch

There have been a few hands in my life

I would rather not touch again

The wet, spongy kind.

Then we have the great ones,

Mozart at his piano, surgeons saving lives

Some insured for millions like Liberace

Tiny new-born ones are best of all…

AAAAA


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Responses

  1. Charli Mills Avatar

    What a beautiful tribute to hands!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thanks, Charli!

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  2. Jennie Avatar

    I love this!

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  3. Jacquie Biggar Avatar

    My favorite are my husband’s. Calloused from years of hard work. Hands that cherished our baby girl, and picked me up when I fell down.
    This is beautiful <3

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Jacquie, your husband sounds lovely…

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    2. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Jacquie…

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  4. kevin cooper Avatar

    Lovely poem! :)

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Kevin…

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  5. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Hands are unique, aren’t they? Good poem. I like the thoughts of your grandfather.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Jacqui…

      Like

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