Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge ~ Etheree

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Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 121, “Slow & Work,” #SynonymsOnly

 

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Run

for your

life, it’s time.

Just keep running

the black dog is slow.

His hunting days are over

he wants to follow you now.

Find a warm home, food, and comfort.

To sleep, dream by a warm, lazy fire.

You left food out, now he’s found his way home…

aaaaa

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  1. Vashti Q Avatar
    Vashti Q

    Interesting Etheree, Anita. I enjoyed it. :D

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you!

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  2. Violet Lentz Avatar
    Violet Lentz

    I get a bit of a native American feel here, I love the idea of finding the warmth and comfort of a home. Isn’t that all of our most basic desire?

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      jenanita01

      Glad you enjoyed it, Violet!

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  3. Colleen’s 2019 #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Recap No. 121, “Work & Slow,” #SynonymsOnly – The Faery Whisperer

    […] Work & Slow, #Etheree Runfor yourlife, it's timeJust keep runningthe black dog is slowHis hunting days are overhe wants to follow you nowFind a warm home, food, and comfortTo sleep, dream by a warm, lazy fireYou left food out, now he's found his way homeAnita Dawes […]

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  4. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    There’s a lot of hidden meaning in this Etheree, Anita. I like the slow black dog… <3

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you, Colleen…

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