Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

Colleen’s Weekly Challenge…

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Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 120, “Cold & Storm,” #SynonymsOnly

 

Frozen

I

Hear sound

Sharp cutting

Rampaging

My fear lay frozen

I could not speak nor move

A cold hand held my soul still

I rage, I fuel my anger

How did I fall into this dark trap?

Inside I smoulder, waiting to cut free…

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  1. Colleen’s 2019 #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Recap No. 120, “Storm & Cold,” #SynonymsOnly – Colleen Chesebro ~ The Faery Whisperer

    […] "Frozen" #EthereeIHear soundSharp cuttingRampagingMy fear lay frozenI could not speak nor moveA cold hand held my soul stillI rage, I fuel my angerHow did I fall into this dark trap?Inside I smoulder, waiting to cut free…Anita Dawes […]

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  2. robbiesinspiration Avatar
    robbiesinspiration

    This is a fabulous poem, Anita.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      So glad you liked it, Robbie…

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  3. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Anita, there are some powerful emotions erupting from this Etheree… I could see this in a romance book! <3

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      jenanita01

      Glad you liked it, Colleen…

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  4. Violet Lentz Avatar
    Violet Lentz

    Ooooo nicely done!

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